Electrobel

I like it! I like it!
very nice
well done
... :)

Nice work ! There is still little things to improve like FX samples and such stuff, and then you'll be near perfect ! Well done !

Hi Mindsystem!
Heard your track and wrote some words down , to help u further.

First off all i would like to say that i enjoyed the track, but had experienced some annoying sounds.
It all sounds so , so , ... , so cliché, in the meaning of way too many used.
And i don´t mean the sequencing, but the sound , the mastering.

Kick : Try to make it deeper and wider , cause it doesnt sounds so heavy.
Maybe add morre low bass on it.
Not hearable , but feelable.

Synths : Too cheesy , dont try to reach the same sound as your favorite artist , but create your own, bring new elements , new breaks , crashes.

Melody: If there is anything that leads the track , its must be the melody , so looking back on your track ; Way too cheesy. Didn´t gave me an uplifting feeling at all, and i know u have givven me that with your previous work.
Try to bring variation in your notes.

Drums : Good drums , i like them , just try to make them a bit smoother sounding , as in meaning of equalizing it in the high frequencies.

Bassline: Too loud , but OK sounding.

Good work in structure and producing , but the overall theme is done already a zillion times.

I like your style , dont see this as a negatif comment , its just to help you became stabil and selfashured.

Greetz,
Bram

Sorry for this previous comment !
I was not logged in as i am at the school computer , please delete it.
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Hi Mindsystem!
Heard your track and wrote some words down , to help u further.

First off all i would like to say that i enjoyed the track, but had experienced some annoying sounds.
It all sounds so , so , ... , so cliché, in the meaning of way too many used.
And i don´t mean the sequencing, but the sound , the mastering.

Kick : Try to make it deeper and wider , cause it doesnt sounds so heavy.
Maybe add morre low bass on it.
Not hearable , but feelable.

Synths : Too cheesy , dont try to reach the same sound as your favorite artist , but create your own, bring new elements , new breaks , crashes.

Melody: If there is anything that leads the track , its must be the melody , so looking back on your track ; Way too cheesy. Didn´t gave me an uplifting feeling at all, and i know u have givven me that with your previous work.
Try to bring variation in your notes.

Drums : Good drums , i like them , just try to make them a bit smoother sounding , as in meaning of equalizing it in the high frequencies.

Bassline: Too loud , but OK sounding.

Good work in structure and producing , but the overall theme is done already a zillion times.

I like your style , dont see this as a negatif comment , its just to help you became stabil and selfashured.

Greetz,
Bram

Ouuuuaaiiiis Jonnyy !! C'est du bon boulot ca !!!

Continue comme ca, c'est ca que j'aime ! :D