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Mindsystem - Twister

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Hope you'll like this one! I think it's better than my last one! Leave comment, I will remake it in the future. So tell me what's wrong or good certainly ;-).Good listening!

Ps: Maybe you'll not hear a lot of bass because it's a 112 kbps compressed mp3... On the Wave file I hear the bass very well.

Please tell me why you doesn't like if it's your case! It's not constructive to vote bad without saying why!

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theyeti [be] - 11 years ago

I like it! I like it!
very nice
well done
... :)
 

FlashyJ [be] - 11 years ago

Nice work ! There is still little things to improve like FX samples and such stuff, and then you'll be near perfect ! Well done !
 

Anonymous [be] - 11 years ago

Hi Mindsystem!
Heard your track and wrote some words down , to help u further.

First off all i would like to say that i enjoyed the track, but had experienced some annoying sounds.
It all sounds so , so , ... , so cliché, in the meaning of way too many used.
And i don´t mean the sequencing, but the sound , the mastering.

Kick : Try to make it deeper and wider , cause it doesnt sounds so heavy.
Maybe add morre low bass on it.
Not hearable , but feelable.

Synths : Too cheesy , dont try to reach the same sound as your favorite artist , but create your own, bring new elements , new breaks , crashes.

Melody: If there is anything that leads the track , its must be the melody , so looking back on your track ; Way too cheesy. Didn´t gave me an uplifting feeling at all, and i know u have givven me that with your previous work.
Try to bring variation in your notes.

Drums : Good drums , i like them , just try to make them a bit smoother sounding , as in meaning of equalizing it in the high frequencies.

Bassline: Too loud , but OK sounding.

Good work in structure and producing , but the overall theme is done already a zillion times.

I like your style , dont see this as a negatif comment , its just to help you became stabil and selfashured.

Greetz,
Bram
 

TranceBoy [be] - 11 years ago

Sorry for this previous comment !
I was not logged in as i am at the school computer , please delete it.
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Hi Mindsystem!
Heard your track and wrote some words down , to help u further.

First off all i would like to say that i enjoyed the track, but had experienced some annoying sounds.
It all sounds so , so , ... , so cliché, in the meaning of way too many used.
And i don´t mean the sequencing, but the sound , the mastering.

Kick : Try to make it deeper and wider , cause it doesnt sounds so heavy.
Maybe add morre low bass on it.
Not hearable , but feelable.

Synths : Too cheesy , dont try to reach the same sound as your favorite artist , but create your own, bring new elements , new breaks , crashes.

Melody: If there is anything that leads the track , its must be the melody , so looking back on your track ; Way too cheesy. Didn´t gave me an uplifting feeling at all, and i know u have givven me that with your previous work.
Try to bring variation in your notes.

Drums : Good drums , i like them , just try to make them a bit smoother sounding , as in meaning of equalizing it in the high frequencies.

Bassline: Too loud , but OK sounding.

Good work in structure and producing , but the overall theme is done already a zillion times.

I like your style , dont see this as a negatif comment , its just to help you became stabil and selfashured.

Greetz,
Bram
 

Anonymous [be] - 11 years ago

Ouuuuaaiiiis Jonnyy !! C'est du bon boulot ca !!!

Continue comme ca, c'est ca que j'aime ! :D
 
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