Electrobel

lets try to be polite,shall we....where to begin.....

they told me this in the past,and now i apply it to you...

i like the bazeline...but it does'nt sound good

rythme is cool to,nothing special about it...

the guitar and vocal are out of tone;
loose the guitar,or make it better;

all the crapy sax and trumpets,give this whole song a cheap feeling;

at the end,i think its like 2 songs mixed into each other,no reaaaal song,just samps pasted,notes all over the place.....a real mess;

take the song back from the bazeline,and see what ya can do;

like it is now,its the wurst song from you,i heared,if i can recall wright;

greetz

and now i just read,you adress me;

in this stage of a song,i dont mind clippin,just make a damn song 1ste

bon c'est vrai qu'elle est pas parfaite mais j'suis pas un pro non plus mais c'est vrai que la tite mélodie a la fin c'est pas trop bon ... enfin ...

I like the idea! But after reading the comments, i've kinda listened more 'closely' and those elements probably need some finetuning... U work'n purely with samps? Grtz

yee maybe a finetuning but otherwise you've right to a "good job man!"

i don't undestand the negative comment.
Not everything is produced in big studio's.
It's the idee that counts
I like it !!!
keep up the good work