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yenneman - One Triangle

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Hi.

More electro, less industrial. Visits to several adult sites (one has to suffer to make something creative), trying to find a good riff on my guitar and lots of other things come to mind when I hear this one. It's dark, and lives from adrenaline.
Let the music speak. And you listen.

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Bedlam [be] - 18 years ago

So this is why you were looking around porno sites for samples :)

Okayyyyyyyyyyy !

Still pretty dark electro I would consider it industrial too actually... when you see some very lowbeat songs in industrial !

Okay since i'm a big fan of yours I will make a big fan critical comment !

If I didn't know and if i didn't listen about 100 times to your other songs i would say this is awesooome :)

Because it is !
But if I compare to for example Jadbomber (ok i probably mispelt it ) , the composition aside (which is surely unique), the samples you use are mostly the same !

Now i know in some sorta way it's like your signature sample and most artists have that but almost all the samples are the same as Jadbomber ! Now i havent listened to Indus for a long time but maybe you could experiment on new industrial samples :)

phew that was long !

But its still faboulous and it will still go into my favs and onto my mp3 :)

But this is just something for you as an artist to help you develope !

Now for the song :

I think you can pump up the guitar riffs more like in Battle Royale because they are in the back you can't hear them much :)

I think you've found a new hihat ? Because it sounds better :)
I like the little switch at 2 min, the melody there behind that pops up at 2:10 can be pumped up a bit more cuz its sounds really good in the ears !
And maybe the low bass sound is a tad loud and covers up a bit the beautiful melody synth :)

And you could imagine another twist into the melody at 2 mins around 4 mins cuz it starts getting a bit repetitive. The last 30 seconds to end is great !

"She will suffer greatly"


Okay that's enough !

Great song

Thumbs up !

+fav +mp3 player :)


edit: omg this comment is so long :(
 

yenneman [be] - 18 years ago

Well, if that isn't the longest comment I ever got :) Thx.

I just want to point out I didn't use the same samples, I doublechecked :p . Considering percussion I usually build the song structure with standard samples, then I search for good samples, on which I put lots of effects...same goes for melody sounds: I try to get them towards the sound I like most, so they may sound the same as in my other songs, but they're all different in origin :) .
And about that guitar stuff: there's not really a guitar in here, what I meant in my introduction was that I search for melodies on my guitar.
And to conclude, about repetivity: I imagined this one with vocals, so there would be some variation...also, people tell me that my songs are not bad, but always a bit short.

Thanks for your hints and appreciation.
 

Bedlam [be] - 18 years ago

well then u could add a guitar riff that kills :)

as for the samples then i guess well, i was wrong :p

butt it does sounds similar though but maybe its not a bad thing
 

komluv [be] - 18 years ago

nice track,love the melody and the synths.+fav

Greetz KL
 

yenneman [be] - 18 years ago

Thx :)
 

PsyAviah [be] - 18 years ago

Nice, but i personally would've liked it if the sounds were abit more raw..
But hey that's taste!
Nice melody, nice structure, love to hear it with vocals
let me know!

Grtzz
 

Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago

I can instantly tell it's a floorfilling underground industrial clubhit! Must be your fastest bpm til date.

This is so massive, give me a few beers and I'll freak out like George Bush with a pretzel :)

No wonder you browse adult content, this would be the hit of all times in sm-clubs :). I don't mean anything wrong with that, I really feel it's got this nasty, underground, hidden bunker party tension. I can imagine lots of leather, sweaty bodies, erotic dancing and drugs here.

Still very Yen, but at the same time also a refreshing wind through your portfolio.
 

coherentaudio [be] - 18 years ago

vet
 

jonathannox [be] - 18 years ago

lekker nummer, zeker die synth en melodie.heeft al verschillende keren hier op gestaan. verveelt niet. very nice!
 

Distreality [be] - 18 years ago

good, but I think it would be even better if it was a bit slower...

nice one...
 

adio [be] - 18 years ago

i second rabauws comment, underground-bunker level is high.. and i dont mean that in a negative way
excellent work...
 
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