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luna - Broken dreams in Neverland
Description
first one hereedit 1: more complex instrumentation
edit2: new mastering
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Comments
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
This is, in general, great, for a first upload. Really a wonderful piece of music, very smooth, almost emotional.
As for the sound quality: it's dense, but I think it's a bit too dense. I mean, I'm listening through headphones, and as wonderful as the composition may be, production-wise it comes off with a harsh edge, it sounds rather muffled. So, I think you can clean this up, production-wise. Playing it loud does not always mean it will sound better. You need to find the perfect sound balance, without a risk of audio clipping. So, I'd suggest to lower some volumes here and there.
Second, the strings sound a bit too fake in my opinion. Probably also because of the loudness, but some different reverb settings might also help.
And third, I wouldn't have the strings stop so suddenly for the bells.
But, in all, this is a splendid opener. Seems like we can expect some nice compositions from you, so keep it up!
lorsen [be] - 18 years ago
yenneman [be] - 18 years ago
And you officially gained my jealousy :)
edith [be] - 18 years ago
HarryPoppins [be] - 18 years ago
yep them strings...
But really nice! (made it with edirol orchestra?) I love the ending!
Erophin [be] - 18 years ago
luna [be] - 18 years ago
do i have the possibility to have a sencond first time here :D?
yes there're choirs in the background.
and for the loud ambiance, i know it but, apparently, a friend said me that it's a problem with the frequences of the low sound, or something like that i did'nt understand...
and the end, it's the little fae tinker bell who arrives :)
ps: i use reason
..and i speak too much, sorry for my blablabla
DrGonzo [be] - 18 years ago
i enjoyed it all the way...it was sad when it finished :(
FabioPersonale [be] - 18 years ago
want to hear more of this kind of music
Kinet [be] - 18 years ago
TheThreatOfDawn [be] - 18 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
Well what your friend says seems to be true, Luna. Well at least partly I think. I think the low freqs indeed are causing a bit of damage, so maybe you could add up your treble settings and lower the bass on the small EQ square on your mixer channels.
Judging from your sound quality, I assume you're using Reason 3? (I still use old Reason) So, another possibility is that you've spoiled/overdone it a bit in the mastering suite, like Fabio mentioned. But mixing/mastering ain't easy, so I'm sure it will turn out alright in the future. If you don't overdo the bass on the mixer, I think it won't sound so muffled anymore after the mastering.
heatfuse [be] - 18 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
Of course many improvements can be made, but I hear lots of potential here, and we gotta encourage that, instead of mugging about "beginner level". My opinion though.
AMF [be] - 18 years ago
(AMF, the 3 word-reviewer strikes again)
heatfuse [be] - 18 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
totally agree!
PsyAviah [be] - 18 years ago
Maybe add some other instruments ore extra percussion to vary the song a little more..
Neverhteless i like the melody, good job, and welcome on ebel :)
luna [be] - 18 years ago
someone asked me what are my influences on the other song of mine.
ben harper, aphex twin, pink floyd, muse etc.
Despoilah [be] - 18 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
I really like how the choir comes out now, mixing is a lot better. But, there's still some instrument that sounds off balance compared to the rest... can't really put the finger on which one, but I think it's the high freqs of the orchestral strings, which still cause a little bit of damage. If it's an NNXT, be careful with the volumes, it's always a nasty device.
melodikpinpon [be] - 18 years ago
its dommage , the title was nice
:)
reaman [be] - 18 years ago
All these positive comments are justified but nevertheless it's a track with no surprises at all. It happens to have the right intensity but personally i don't like the fact that the strings stop just like that and then start again... it's an ugly staccato...
I too like to have layer upon layer but the layers in this song don't differ enough to enrichen it.
Anyway, it's just taste and for starters this IS good quality. Keep on.
(nice pic in your profile)
Anonymous [be] - 18 years ago
luna [be] - 18 years ago
ps: thanks for the picture
aphone [be] - 18 years ago
and a very good outro... good job! Greetz
kaoz [be] - 18 years ago
SoLo [be] - 18 years ago
Doorchaser [be] - 18 years ago
luna [be] - 18 years ago
" at 2'36'' hum maybe a wrong note" WHATT?? i hear it now !
aphone [be] - 18 years ago
hosmOz [be] - 18 years ago
mhmm, anyway about your tracks it is a nice composition, a bit too repetetive like some ppl
said,but this is a good track...
luna [be] - 18 years ago