Electrobel

the voice a little bit too ahead. You could add a little effect to it. But can be that it is your choice... The piano could also stop, so that it is more present at other moments. This track makes me think of an album "slut" produced by Laswell if I remember well. PS: I hope also that we arrive finally at a change, but with a soft revolt then...

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the beat is nice and steady.. dont really like the voice (and the wild 'scratchpitching') and dont worry we wont send u pm..

no i didn't say you did it, but two guys have done it to 'help' me, it's a bit embarassing you know, i know i make strange things wit my voice, i'll remak eit without my voice and with some adds

Well well, you're a revolutionary type :)

Actually in this case I think it's rather good that the voice and samples are so upfront, you're trying to get a message across and it's gotta be loud enough if people want to understand it.

As for the music: I really like the clarinet, the rattling play of it instantly took me back to when I was a kid, and they played this series on the telly "secrets of the sahara", don't know if you're familiar with it. I was just a little kid back then, but I've always remembered that series as very great. The clarinet really sounded so "sahara", you know, like a snake charmer.

After 2:00 you use some more electro elements, I wonder why not replace the piano throughout the song by some other electro synths? I think you'd have a great electro track then.

Final point: when your voice goes solo, at the beginning and the end, there's this crunching in the background, from your mic. Adding some reverb to your vocal patch might help (put the voice in an NN19, and attach some reverb and/or vocoder to it, then EQ the treble to 15-20 and lower the bass -10/-15 on the mixer channel). Some microphones also have this crunching just after clicking "record", if you wait a few seconds before starting to sing sometimes this also helps.

A song with a message, I always like it when people try to go just that extra mile and put some deeper meaning in the music.

excellent track. but yeah, i second HarryPoppins for that scratching voice passage, unecessary imo. i realy dig the piano and rediscover the luther king thing for other words than only the dream sentence. in a technical way, i feel all the mix too central exept that great piano. +fav.

making music is for me like painting.Alot of different way,differnt techniq,different colors for painting a design on the screen;but the most important is making with heart....FREEDOM....good work.Thumb up

I was sold at "freedom" nice job !

i think its all good !

:)

This is exactly what I mean with a different idea!!

You love that piano-sound don't you?

Well I guess you should listen to MucH's work on this site, very MucH familiar!!

Nice Message I'm totally in line!!

PS: Don't lose the piano sound and the voice (just a humble suggestion :D)

GOOD

is it me or is there something wrong with the voice???
also i keep having the illusion that it's not completely on tempo, it might just be me tho...

also i don't like some piano bits

i'm sorry, i can't give you a thumb up for this one, but maybe in time i'll learn to apreciate your music