Electrobel

I dont think it only has to be sequenced another way and to be remastered, there are plenty of other things that do not work in this track.

Let's start with the most obvious : The power of your drums. Or should I say, the lack of power.
Your drums patterns are pretty ok, but the sounds you used lacks horribly in about every frequency area (especialy mid and low).

Then there is the structure. Yes, you definatly need to "sequence" it another way. You actually need to make a real structure : A begining, a end, maybe one or two drops, and more variations.

Finally, you really need something to go with that "melody", that will fill up the empty spaces in the overal track.


Conclusion : Keep working on it, try to get new samples, or upgraded drums samples, and maybe you'll get something good.

you bastard :d
it's my poor remix you remixed here, you could have mentioned it! :p
no problem in fact...