Electrobel

well, i'm happy that u released this one, cause it's really good! but i wouldn't touch the release of your melody, let it be short notes (it sounds a bit trancy otherwise). instead you can always add more and more reverb to the melo.
i like the little backgroundsoudns very much!
grtz!!

reall nice track...
but kinda have to agree with firefrog on the synth issue
other than that: lovin it! :D

Aight, I've heard this one before I guess :D. Copy paste & translate my comment from 'the other forum' ;) :

"I like it very much, believe it or not...the 4/4 kick and bassline: simple but effective! Dark and clear sound, super background sounds and pads..."

And additional: I don't care about the 'trancy' synth...gives an extra touch.

are you to guuud for icz??

1st ya say yaself it aint 100% finished;
i'm not gone move it,but i wont comment either

decide what ya want,honor or help;greetz

some very nice details, sounds flowing around...but i'd indeed adjust that cold synth-sound, overall really impressive and cool

Nah this song isn't good enough for labels or releasing. So i placed it here to get some feedback. I'm not planning to post an update. Just for my own sets... my 2nd track in reason! Grtz!

Thnx for feedback! Commenting back @ ya'll

The spacy sounds in the first minutes are a bit too synthetic sounding - i like mechanic and crispy sounds more for that purpose. The sound with the loud roomreverb is a bit dull too. But this is a great progress man

Hmmm not really to my personal liking.
There are some fine jingles, bleeps and sounds here and there which I like, the darker, more industrialized ones for instance.

But if you made it with Reason again then I have to admit the sound design is already a lot better and more diverse than your previous track, so that's at least is a positive evolution.

For the rest it's just up to the listener's personal appreciation of course :)