Electrobel

get the kick more upfront and play more with the beginning sound, add some subtle distortion on it, and modulate a bit...
also spread the eq...(so that the main eq of the bassdrum is cut out of the freq range of the bass and vice versa)

and then add percussion, hats,...
could become great...

its minimal,and i like it

moved,catch ya lataz,dont forget 21-10!!

Yea! I also like where you're going... Some cut up vocals would be nice...You know, the ones that make a litte tune on their own... But then in cut up /destroyed vocals...

ok, keep them coming those comments... feel same thing here... could become a good track to play in sets but needs some refinement.
cq, didn't forget

Yeah,definitly my kind of muze...indeed kick needs to be a little more upfront, and yes cut up voices always do the trick in these kind of productions. some delay from time to time on a hihat part, some retriggerings of time, and you get a verry verry nice song...great start...

retrigger... heard of it but don't know how to do it... any tips?

You know, that long pause after the first part is annoying man ;)
In any case I would use a different snare/rim sound. I like the main loop/main construction. And you need to come up with a nifty sub bass, to make it really ‘deep’. The bassy backsynth on the right pan is really nice, keep it. You’re getting better in this genre since I can clearly hear a more reamanish (i.e. personal/original) approach here (remember my carnage of a review on your previous house project ;p). I guess for minimal it would be good. But you still need to spice it up overall. What’s the title referring to btw?

thx for the review... will try to live up to all comments cuz they come from people that i respect for their musical skills (and other things as well?)

title? nothing in particular... just wanted to have an X

i would try to sneak in some sax, or maybe some reverbed high tubulars .. something that would contrast a little with the rest.
nevertheless, /me likes
:)

sorry but the track will stay as it is... lost all data during HD-crash.

thx for good advice anyway

like it a lot... grtz

Yessss! Can't understand why there was only 1 vote for this!!!
And I just.... LOVE your big break!
+1
Please finish it!