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reaman - take your time

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electronic popsong with vocals..

tried to make some classicaly structured popsong with electronics and exf., rythm, bass and Thomas Dolby-like violins and a theremin (god I love this!)

lyrics:
You and I - a big mistake
you said
we're not a sea, just a lake
too confined, lacking any freedom
combined we can still become one

All I say is, take your time (2x)

You and I - I can forget
you said
it's not a dream, we're wide awake
uncensored lacking any reason
it's not a game, it's not an act of treason

All I say is, take your time
take your time

I'd warmly welcome comments... it's a totally new way of making music for me and I'd like to read your constructive thoughts.

(masterd through headies)

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Rabauw [be] - 17 years ago

Something different, not easy to get into. It's an acquired taste to get into the soundpicture and arrangement.
I'm listening on laptop speakers right now so I probably ain't fully enjoying it at maximum sound quality, I'll check back later to give some more indepth analysis.
All I know so far is, that your vocal arrangement is well-done at first impression considering the odd build and structure.
I like it when people dare to think outside the square som I'm sure that after a couple more listenings (on decent speakers) this will be a total delight to my ears.
More later...
 

Skip [be] - 17 years ago

(just that reversed piano you occasionely use is a bit loud in comparison with the rest)

theremin,waw,nice!
cool,easy vibe
hm...Donno what else to say or comment on...fine work you did.
cheerz.
 

BpOlar [be] - 17 years ago

nice track ,of course very well structured

Didn't know you're a Theremin lover...
you know that it was used on 'good vibrations'/Beach Boys , so everytime I here a Theremin it brings me back to this song;

good track
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 17 years ago

Nice track! Some sounds could sound better (rythmic part - the volume of some instruments - fx on the vocals)
But its a nice piece as it is now..
greetz
 

SandwichGarnier [be] - 17 years ago

Loved it
Synths are just great
As Horny Potam says, rythmic part could sound better and little fx on the vocals would help
+++ !
 

rf061992 [be] - 17 years ago

at the 1rst time.....bof
at the 2nd time ....wow
This song asks for several listening.....
 

reaman [be] - 17 years ago

thank god I listened to it a hundred times now... imagine not liking your own songs ;.)

anyway, already a big hug for commenting this track.
It's not E.O.M. (electrobel-oriented music) but it has a right to be here I guess.
 

Kolf [be] - 17 years ago

Very good track, fine production, classy stuff
 

Anonymous [be] - 17 years ago

Keep on going strong !
 

Rabauw [be] - 17 years ago

Another shot at this one, as promised.
What I love in this track, is that vocal arrangement "take your time" in different tone mixed in front and back.

The reversed piano is indeed probably a tad loud.

By its sound, structure, and build it might as well have been a Depeche Mode song. And as a DM-fan, you can take that as a big compliment :)
 
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