Electrobel

is that the angel rollah break? same as i used in break the silence i think.
breaks are well played, kick fits well. only the whole thing is a bit empty, try adding some synths to fill up the void. this could become something extremly hefty
cheerio

Hi,
idea is good , pretty nice sound.
A bit emty, but I think when you can construct allready this, you can do even better.
try to Add more hardcore kicks, dark sounds as pads, synths, industrial samples etc.
thumb up keep it up
aceton

aceton is right you know, what you got here so far is very good soundwise, kicks are very clean, breaks are good quality...
you definitly should be able to handle background atmo's & pads, synths are a bit messing around if you don't know any musical theory, but i'm convinced that you could turn them to your hand, and if they are the same quality as your beats and breaks, this track could become, like i said, "extremely hefty"

the fact that i came back for another listen proves it all ;)

hi tanks a lot:)
i'll try to found some others synth , but my favorite vsti (massive :D) doesn't work :( i look for a new vst

Sorry to say, but there is deff something fucked up about the sound of your track..
im listening with real good headphones and the ames are horribly saturated with a bog prrrrrrrrrrrt on top and theyre badly cut, like little errors everywhere..

after reading the other comments, i dont know if the rest is deaf or if ebel is wrongly streaming your track, but the errors remain..

wierd, sounds not that much different as most posted breakcore.
I hear a prrrrrrt ,but thats the inbetween basskick I believe.

i'm afraid i can't say i'm listening on monitors or real good speakers. orrr.. i'm deaf :p
but then again, i like breacore with saturated breaks, besides, if the track gets filled up, it might balance the whole.
So i'll stick with what i said

i hear cracks and clipping sounds too but if I listen beyond that it's a nice track man; especially if you're just beginning. Thumb up

tanks for all coms =)

i can't delete the "prrr" cause i don't hear it with my 5euroheadphone :s , (maybe is it the bassline)
I'll ask to a friend who have monitoring
(you're right , i begin since 8month^^)

Bah even if you put it a fond without headphones (especially the beginning)
you hear a big prrrrrrrooooot..
i think i allready listend 5 times cu it intrigues me.. ;)

As for the song itself, its quite ok, nice kick and snare game ;) maybe indeed add more story, more ambience, more melody, bass, etc.. but good work as a beginner ;)
the title is also a bit.... imo
bien a vous,
H

hmm yeah the sounds is really not ok, strange that you don't hear it hehe, songwise it's cool :)

ok, i just listend at a normal volume (last night i had to keep things quiet) i can hear the saturation now. but all in all i still think it's very decent for a third track. taking that in mind this really is a good start, structurewise then.

its too slow

i added a new song based on this way of composition with compressor and a more fast (220bpm)


just wait that the song be accepted

(&sorry for my english ^^)