Electrobel

Hi, I'll try to be constructive and say what I would do with the song:
First impression: very nice but a little too polite. It lacks punch and I'd do it with a very drastic change around 3' + the addition off another instrument in the first 3'. At around 3' I'd create a "stop" and the swell of another melody/rythm/instrument.
I think the string are sometimes a little too idle, too high, so they loose credibility.
So shorten it up or create a second part.
Hope I helped you a little.

thehheh,you have to learn youre genres
this is no downbeat,just house

although it isn't that bad ,just loose the piano,it needs a deep piano melo with a high string,to end up cool,nice you get my drift,i'll stop listening now,cause my dog freaks out>>best moni's around

catch ya lataz