Electrobel

guud track. It realy needs vocals indeed. The kick is a bit too hard. Make it more lounchy and try to bring more breaks.

Gr.

Nice and commercial I agree with Elfish for making the kick smoother. Maybe a real chorus is missing somewhere. Nice work anyway.

yeahhhhh

funky beat, luv it ;-)

good ,nice but...

just a detail,in the masetring,the feeling of that string is lost,i heard it when all the trumps stopped playing,or it is the mastering,or ya need to squize those string-notes,between the trump hits

and in the structure ,there was no break,no time to stop that beat,and make a kind of climax,wich i really mis in this track

but again,good,nice but some work to be done

yep,

thx for the useful comments, folks!

-about the beat.. maybe a lil' softer indeed (but not too much i think)
-vocals.. i'm trying to get it done!
-strings.. they only appear in the end to give the end a somewhat 'fuller' sound. It's not meant to be in the whole track.
-breaks.. you 're probably right! I'll try to build 1 in the track to work towards a climax.. (but bare in mind that this is house.. no breakbeat)

thx anyway.. more trax coming on this site soon...cheers
Dj4Eyez

dude,i did not mean breaks as in breakcore etc,i ment break,from have a break,quit plaing the kickdrum,so only the instruments play,then ya can climb again,like in house

i 'm a house dj ,instrumental bit of the song is ok,work to be done in structure,variations,like i ment before

no offence,
I know what ya meant, just expressed it wrong (jokewise.. éh)
hold y'r horses!
:)

Very very nice basics! Time to fill it op now :) Freestyle some solo elements in it...That's what is missing imho... This could be a killer track! Keep it up! Grtz

thanx!

my thoughts exactly!

j aime ton style , mais est ce vraiment toi qui joue??? les samples me sembles trop definis, mais je ne conteste pas ta musique!!! continue comme ca, ca en vaut la peine!

merci!
non, je ne'ai pas utilisé des samples!

damn...would like to hear Djerem to freestyle a bit on a rhode piano on thisone.... Wonder what that would give :)

go ahead damit :-)

more collaboration is truly appreciated.. and a record contract too.. but hey..

cheers
d

you should know wich chords it is made in,before solo-ing things on this

The trumpet idea is great but the trumpet sound itself is shite. Get rid off it...but replace it with a better one of a same trumpet. Or maybe filter it or double it with a synth. Great to hear that you can be dark and happy in your music. The bass might need some filtering to my taste, a bit too metallic. Brice

jip this could be ùusci for a nice summer poolparty , when does the voice or solo come???????????

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