Electrobel

Hmmz , melodic ? yes .
But the wrong ones ..

They dont make sense , they have no feeling , and there out of tune .

Somethimes your synths go up , dont , its too loud .

Kick is too quiet .

Arp to thin .

Dont hit me :)
Just saying these things because i want to help u .
Also i think its too game boy like .

Try again !
Sorry :)

Greetz

hehe i like it, the kick soundz cool :p ... very melodic , if this song gets the right soundz, the right remixer :p ... it would be great ...

keep inventing stuff
iepss!