Electrobel

Congratulation !
I think music colaboration is really enjoyable only when its sincerely made... so, long life to your common sparks ;-) !

Just to let you know, Loki is also the Trickster God / Lord of Mischief in Scandinavian mythology.

As for the mix: the sound spectrum is filled up well. From the dominant (malström?) synth & piano to the little fuzzy effect in the background, filling up all empty spaces. Which is a good thing, gives some depth to the mix.

Musically however very repetitive. The track desperately needs some variation. The same melody over and over, I basically here only 1 idea, and all the rest are additives, and only that. It's almost easy to get fooled, because the general structure and builds are good, and also the song is rather short, leaving few time to actually realize there's a lack of variation.

you are certainly right rabauw about the repetitiveness ... we were maybe too "taken" in this melody which we both liked ... we'll try to have a second view ... ;)

thanks

i agree with rabauw, a lot of people (really to much) make 1 or 2 harmony, with a 4 or 8 beat melody (not really the case here but no so far)... We want more and we can all do more...just taking time... Death to the copy/paste satisfaction !!!! (and i repeat, not really the case here, but not so far)

I'm don't completely agree with Rabauw and mekaS.
I think you should keep the song on 1 melody but add some extra structures to it...
There should be more things you only hear once or twice in the song which are details that cover up the repetitiveness cuz at about 1:50 it starts to feel a bit the same

I think you should keep the same sequence but add some details that make it more interesting :)

keep up the good work !

is this a piano sound from Reason ???????????? Cuz it's beautiful :)

Please keep working on this track !

yep bedlam, all home created ;)
except the piano off course which was taken from reason (and added some reverb to it)

The other little piano was made with a subtractor and a bit of scream on it.
There's a little LFO on it (but don't know all the properties by heart ;))

We'll try to add some sounds/variation ... I thought it was ok like that, but in fact it still needs a better work
thanks for your constructive com's !

poy poy everybody :)

the reason why it's too repetitive, it's kwen, the hungry in the world, it's him, the cpe, it's him, the world war 2 it's him, and the first, we suppose,

seriously, he's very perfectionnist, and i broke my finger to make and remake ;( so we keep it like this because all of my finger are broken, and now, i'm tipping with my nose, so when my fingers'll getting better, we'll remake it ! ...and when kwen is back from war on vietnam...

yeah i'm so perfectionnist that any change is wrong :/

I'll have to open my view

We'll continue that when i'm back from vietnam ^^

Yeah, relly good ;)

Very very good !!!!

i like this a lot too ! perfect almost- end- of- the- winter mellow track ! :)

Just a plain and simple but very meant NicE One!

+fav

hehe an other one inclassable!
i'love that... as in a dream to the quest of an identity! innerspace or outersace? need just a little bit variations! good smoothy story! ;)

indeed verry cool sound. i never heard anything from you, but this is worthy to checkout the rest youve got for us...

Celle-ci est calme et reposante, du genre Cafe del Mar.