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READYdot - Suffocating

Suffocating

 
READYdot [be]
Genre: Electropop
License: BY-NC-ND
Duration: 3m44s
Created: 18 years ago
Uploaded: 17 years ago
12 like, 1 dislike
Listened: 594 times
 

Description

I love this track! But I'm really stuck with it! The voice is mine and also the small guitar part is live played from me (perhaps nothing big, but for me it is ^^) Used my EA-1 for the little acid-background sound, but now I don't know if I should end it without adding something or if it needs some kind of interlude... or even something else, but I think that the mastering is allready pweetty good!?

HELP! :) thnx!

UPDATE (26/11/06): So I changed the whole song a bit: changed the bass, took the distro from the drum, eqed the drums, lowered the guitar, added some fills for the drums, etc. Tell me what you think!

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Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago

You have quite an entertaining voice to listen to.

I really would adjust the level of the cymbal, all too loud and all too noizy, also increase kick and snare. The vocals add quite a lot to the quality of the song.

the guitar is a nice addition but is also too loud, and you play too much release, try to fade-out that release in the mix.

It's a good song but from my point of view the final mixing could be better.
 

READYdot [be] - 18 years ago

Thnx for the compliments! In fact it's not the cymabl being to loud, but the downsampling! I'll have to EQ that! Thnx for the worthy tips! Stay tuned!
 

Anonymous [be] - 18 years ago

the drum sequence doesnt fit with the melody line i think or the other way around

 

READYdot [be] - 18 years ago

Yes it's true, but I'd like to get away from the 100%quantization, but that is not an easy task to achieve manually, things like FLs Swing or Humanize do those things, but I prefer now working in Live to keep the natural analogue touch, but I'll try to make it less obvious! THNX!
 

Funky [be] - 18 years ago

Dared disto drums :) They give it an extra dimension...Your voice is good! It does sound a bit busy in some parts...Could be the swing in combination with the mix that gives me that impression..dunno..Guess you'll sort it out ;) Grtz
 

READYdot [be] - 18 years ago

Thnx! It is always difficult for a sound-engeniering newb like me to get things right... often it's pure chance that the mix works ^^
 

brainboil [be] - 18 years ago

..don't like that kind of voices that much but for the rest...well done !
 

READYdot [be] - 18 years ago

Thnx! I just consider my voice as another VST in some extend... ^^
 

transynth [be] - 17 years ago

cool voice idd!
 

READYdot [be] - 17 years ago

Thnx, its my favourite VST, `cause it has no knobs, and it is easy to use! Well most of the time that is! ^^
 

Anonymous [be] - 17 years ago

yo!
 
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